Dying Illusions

[Vacancy]

okay...so I thought...like, WOW am I evah hypah! wewt! And then I thought, I know! I'll write a helluvah poem! Here goes! ^_^

Dying Illusions

Death falls through the floor,
and the broken merely cry,
as blood slips through the door,
Close your eyes, today you die.

Touch the stars, they glow so bright,
Keep watching them as they glow,
Hanging in the skys all night,
Like the heads all in a row.

Illusions fly through, break your senses,
cry now, die now, fall through the floor,
Rise to be the breaker of fences,
drop all defenses, and open the door.

Lifeless and broken your body I hold,
Crying to have your back, oh my dear,
Your lullaby gone, your mother's grown old,
Breath now, breath again, that I might hear.

Dropping you softly I forget who I am,
falling quietly sideways, still holding your hand,
last threads of hope now slide through the dam,
and I'm broken, forgotten, I die lost in the sand...

[ShadowRune]

0.0... booootiiiful imagery! and and YEE! *glomps* lovely XD

[Vacancy]

lol....thankies! ^_^

[Ravyn]

I had this commanding urge to read this.

And I am SO glad I did! This is wonderful!! At first it's very shocking and creepy, you don't know who's saying it, then at the end you still kind of wonder if it's a angsty love poem or tragic hate. It's soooo goood!!!

[Vacancy]

Thank you so much, Ravyn!

Angst rules....I don't know why, but it does. I'm a sucker for angst. O.o

Not to mention it's nice to have someone new read my stuff....and like it....with no obligation....lol....

Nothing against people who always comment on my stuff, you guys are awesome, too! ^_^

[Ravyn]

This is a very good poem! I was forced to comment on it, greatness should never be hidden.