Ravyn
Squire
International Authoress
"Amoniti, birdy!"
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Post by Ravyn on Aug 16, 2005 1:22:52 GMT
I get dizzy Suddenly My head is swimming What is he saying? My eyes start to blur In my mind there is thunder A terrible storm raging inside I should never have tried To focus. To stare I still don’t know why I dare As I look forward Into the psycho ward. No escape, no sound! But the motions are around I’ve lost all that I’ve found As I turn to face the ground… I mean… What the hell is up with the forum’s new background?
…I had to do it. 20 second poem!
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Post by Largo LeGrande on Aug 16, 2005 1:31:22 GMT
Thats Damn awesome for 20 seconds! Hehe, thats Really good, I like it... and yes.. dizzy.... so dizzy...
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Ravyn
Squire
International Authoress
"Amoniti, birdy!"
Posts: 398
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Post by Ravyn on Aug 16, 2005 1:39:04 GMT
hehehehehehehe!!! Don't look directly at it!
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Post by Wen Mernde on Aug 16, 2005 4:53:05 GMT
kewl poem....very true...the theme had me guessing a bit. Or at least until I read the last line.
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Post by Vacancy on Aug 16, 2005 6:17:06 GMT
I think I'm gonna die. I had a poster of Orlando once...
....And it was mysteriosly shredded. By hand. XD
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Post by Largo LeGrande on Aug 16, 2005 6:25:13 GMT
I think I'm starting to feel physically ill from it... But I DO love this poem.
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Post by SuibuOgami on Aug 16, 2005 14:20:26 GMT
Good poem... *stares at background* ... .... .. ... getting nautious...
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Post by Vacancy on Aug 17, 2005 8:20:42 GMT
Starting...Getting....Bah.
You guys shoulda heard me scream when I first saw that retard.
Guess what? I'm going to write something!
Mwuahahahaha
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Ravyn
Squire
International Authoress
"Amoniti, birdy!"
Posts: 398
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Post by Ravyn on Aug 17, 2005 18:11:11 GMT
HEHEHEHEHEHE
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