Au Revoir Mon Amour

[Ravyn]

Au Revoir Mon Amour
(Good-Bye My Love)


So long
My one and only true love
Fair well
My one and only
Good-bye
My darling dearest
My love, my love

Till death do us part
We claimed so from the start
It breaks my heart
A shattered work of art
To see that tragic chart
And know we must depart

So long
My one and only true love
Fair well
My one and only
Good-bye
My darling angel
Good-bye, good-bye

Take care
When I’m not there
Don’t let your heart tear
I know, life’s not fair
We were the perfect pair
Soul mates are always rare

So long
My one and only true love
Fair well
My one and only
Au revoir
My hearts desire
Good-bye, good bye

Good-bye
My one and only true love
Take care
My guardian angel
Fair well
My one desire
Good-bye, good-bye

September 11th/Character Bio inspired poem.

Inspired by my character, Kimberly, my from my latest WIP (Work In Progress) Say It Again, as well as inspired by the stories of the heroes on United Flight 93.

[Vacancy]

Awesome~! *Cheers*

[Ravyn]

thanks!

[ShadowRune]

meyow! lovely syntax ^-^ *glomps* wewtar!

[SuibuOgami]

I like it! It's definately an original. I love the fact that you managed to avoid that genaric feel most poems get (not anyone here, I assure you). It sounds like something a professional would write. And, you know, that's saying something becuase I can be a very harsh judge of charecter. So good job!

[Ravyn]

Thank you! ^_^ My publishers say I should use it in my second book, I wanted to see what people thought, first