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Sept 29, 2005 22:31:39 GMT
Post by Vacancy on Sept 29, 2005 22:31:39 GMT
Cross your legs, Rub the nervousness out, Relax.
Breath clearly, You won't for much longer- And dive.
Hit the water, Smooth entrance, No problems on the surface.
Fall further, Keep going down, Falling untill you reach the bottom.
Rebound, Reach up for life, Suffocating, wondering, flying.
Break the surface, Perfect score, Run away.
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*Blink*
It's not my best, but I've been wanting to for a while..
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Sept 30, 2005 4:08:12 GMT
Post by Wen Mernde on Sept 30, 2005 4:08:12 GMT
wow. I read it once and immediately had to read it again. Rather, what I mean is that the poem was so good it demanded to be read again. The imagery the second time around combined with the analogies...I loved it. It was simply said yet it held so much meaning. Wonderfully done, Em!
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Oct 1, 2005 3:33:09 GMT
Post by Vacancy on Oct 1, 2005 3:33:09 GMT
It's deep! Yay.
Thankies. ^_^
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