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Post by Loneliness on Mar 15, 2006 1:29:43 GMT
Close your mouth Listen closely To my still unfinished story May wisdom come May angels scream This fiction is more than it seems!
First came the prince, All pumped up with pride, Seated quite nicely up next to his bride, Then came the witch, So horribly alone, She turned the maiden's heart to stone.
The maiden thought, What good am I? She hid her face and cried "I'll die!" The prince, distressed, called out to her, But for all her reply, she hadn't even heard.
The prince ran strong, So far away, And now he hates the light of day, The bitterness He grew himself, He stored inside his darkest shelf.
But what of the witch? You may well ask! For that oldness was but a rotten mask! The beutiful girl, Our prince's fiance, The hag and the bride, they're one and the same!
So what imposter Was on that horse? To tell you does cause me great remorse, For the prince who thus far, You might have enjoyed, Turns out to be evil and not to be toyed.
He cast out his bride, Took his sister instead, My the gods come through and have off with his head! The true bride is alive, she knew what was up, And when time came to move, she put it to a stop.
So who was the hero? I've yet to decide, Who is the ruler of my little story time? My prince is a dog, and his sister's a scene, So the witch, that old hag, is, this time, the queen.
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rainlightlyn
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Post by rainlightlyn on Mar 15, 2006 1:44:19 GMT
Cool!
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Post by Loneliness on Mar 15, 2006 1:49:54 GMT
Thanks!
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Post by soldicold on Mar 15, 2006 2:49:24 GMT
Nice...
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Post by Loneliness on Mar 16, 2006 6:57:52 GMT
Thanks again!
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